Fables - Writing unit 13

One day there was a puppy that felt ashamed that it was a puppy. All her friends were very skilled and talented but only the puppy could not find its talent. Her friend cat could jump off from a roof without a scratch and climb trees. Her best friend fox could creep pass a fly without it noticing and her other friend lion was very strong. The puppy tried everything she could think of. She tried cheering, hopping, skipping, climbing trees, slithering, cooking and even gardening. Nothing worked. Puppy was exhausted but as she walked home, she saw her friend bunny crying. Puppy raced up to bunny and asked her what happened. Puppy soon solved bunny’s problem and bunny was delighted. Puppy was happier than ever to solve bunny’s problem and help her out. Later on, puppy helped out all her friends and she was loved by everyone.

“Sometimes we cannot see our own strength.”

2 Responses
  1. Emily Says:

    Hi Joanne
    I really liked your fable and that photo
    at the end :)
    I especially liked the end, when the dog found out his strengths.

    Emily


  2. This is really great Joanne.
    The sotry line is very smart and interesting.
    You used great describing words which helped me understand what the puppy is like.
    It would have been alittle bit more interesting if you made up names for the animals.
    But overall an awsome effort.